All sorts of things going wrong here, not the least of which is it was probably too complicated a scene for the mini moleskine to handle. Then again, this my first time trying to get a bunch of boats like this. I need to study Sargent some more on this subject. Having a larger sheet would help too. He manages to make a jumble come alive. I think I will try this one again, or something like it, on a larger sheet of Arches. There seems to be some potential here if I can sort out a few things.
Thanks for reading.